This is the second draft of my trailer. I have taken the feedback from people commenting on my last draft and have made the changes to create a better trailer.
this could do with a soundtrack to covey the narative to the reader in a more effective way. some of the shots are shaky and you could use stabilisation to improve this. some of the sound has background noise this could be cancelled out or reshot.
but apart from this i like your use of title cards
this could do with a soundtrack to covey the narative to the reader in a more effective way. some of the shots are shaky and you could use stabilisation to improve this. some of the sound has background noise this could be cancelled out or reshot.
ReplyDeletebut apart from this i like your use of title cards